高中英语题型专练 5 ：读后续写

日期：2026-03-03 09:37 点击：

读后续写

 

 

 

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“No, little girl. You can’t get in without the money.” Jeffrey, the bus driver, told a little girl who wanted to get on the bus but only had a few pennies. She must have been around seven years old, and Jeffrey wasn’t in the mood to deal with unaccompanied children that day.

“Please, sir. I want to visit my grandmother,” the little girl begged. “Then go ask your parents for the money and come back next time,” Jeffrey replied and gestured with his hand for the girl to get out. She finally left the bus with her shoulders lowered. Jeffrey saw her sit down at the bus stop and drove off.

He finished his route and went home for the lunch, greeting his wife, Greta, and sitting down on the couch to rest. When he browsed his Facebook posts, an image caught his attention. A picture was shared of the little girl he had just turned away a few hours earlier. The word “Missing” was written on top of the image. He learned that the girl had disappeared a day ago, and her parents were desperately trying to find her.

“Dear! What have I done?” he asked himself, standing up and going to the front door. When Greta asked where he was going, Jeffrey said, “Greta! Quick! Call 911 and this number,” showing her the picture of the girl. “I saw this girl at a bus stop earlier, but I turned her away because she didn’t have enough money. I’m going to find her, but please make those calls.” Having told her where the bus stop was, he went out.

Jeffrey rushed to his car, speeding to the bus stop. Hopefully, the girl was smart enough to stay in one place. He couldn’t believe how careless he had been earlier. She was a little girl all alone. As he drove to the bus stop, Jeffrey vowed to be more careful in the future, especially when it came to children.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式作答。

Finally, Jeffrey saw a tiny figure sitting on the bench at the spot. _______________________

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A few minutes later, the police and another car approached. ___________________________

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文本解读

 

 

 

本文以人物为线索展开。文章描述一个公交车司机Jeffrey在对待一个没有足够车费的小女孩时的态度和行为，以及他后来得知这个女孩失踪后的反应和行动，来展现人性中的善良以及责任感。文章以Jeffrey拒绝让没有钱的小女孩上车开始，后来，他在Facebook上看到女孩失踪的消息，意识到自己的错误并决定去找回她，这展示了他的内疚和决心。最后，文章以他找到小女孩并等待警察到来结束，暗示了他对小女孩的关心以及对自我行为的反思。整个故事展示主角从错误到救赎的过程，同时强调在面对挑战和道德决策时采取行动的重要性。

 

 

 

 

思路点拨

 

 

 

①由续文第一段首句“最后，Jeffrey看到一个小巧的身影坐在原地的长椅上。”可知，在这一段中，应重点描写Jeffrey见到小女孩后的情景。可以运用心理描写来表现他内心的紧张和愧疚。当他看到那个小小的身影坐在长椅上时，他可能会感到一种混合的情绪——松了一口气她还在那里，但同时也为自己之前的不顾及感到自责。这一段可以展开描写他急匆匆地靠近她，确认她的安全，并试图安慰她，与续文第二段警察和父母的到来紧密衔接。

 

②由续文第二段首句“几分钟后，警察和另一辆车过来了。”可知，这一段可以聚焦于警察和另一辆车（可能是她父母的车）的到来，以及随后事件的发展。描述一下小女孩的父母急切地赶到现场，他们的焦虑和担忧可以通过他们急切的动作和表情来表现。此外，这个场景也可以描写小女孩与她父母团聚的感人瞬间以及小女孩的父母对Jeffrey表达感激之情。文章结尾可以描写Jeffrey后续开公交车的做法以及他的所思所感，这样的描写不仅增加了故事的情感深度，还强调了社会责任和个人行动的重要性。

 

 

 

参考范文

 

 

 

Finally, he saw a tiny figure sitting on the bench at the spot. Jeffrey felt relieved and delighted to see the girl staying safe and sound. Trying to calm himself, Jeffrey decided to talk to her gently. He inquired about her name and why she had left home. “I was going to Grandma’s house. My mom wouldn’t let me go.” Sarah replied, swinging one of her feet and looking at the concrete floor. “Your parents are searching for you, and they’ll be here soon,” he assured her, and the little girl gave him a smile.

A few minutes later, the police and another car approached. A woman got out of the vehicle and rushed toward Sarah. The little girl got up and ran to her, yelling, “Mommy!” The police officers approached Jeffrey and he told them the entire story. Sarah’s parents thanked him for what he had done. From then on, Jeffrey helped anyone short on cash that got on his bus, and he always watched out for the kids that were alone because they needed someone like him to do the right job.

 

 

 

亮点词汇

 

 

 

1. safe and sound 安然无恙

2. concrete adj. 混凝土制的

3. short on 缺乏；缺少

4. watch out for 密切注意；留意

 

 

 

高级句型

 

 

 

1. Trying to calm himself, Jeffrey decided to talk to her gently.（动词-ing形式短语作状语）

Jeffrey努力让自己镇静下来，决定温和地和她聊聊。

 

2. From then on, Jeffrey helped anyone short on cash that got on his bus, and he always watched out for the kids that were alone because they needed someone like him to do the right job.（that引导定语从句；because引导原因状语从句）

从那时起，Jeffrey开始帮助那些没钱坐公交车的人，并且总是留意那些单独乘车的孩子，因为他们需要像他这样的人来做正确的事。