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读后续写:10种场景表达

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准确表达故事背景
 

 

一、表达时间

 

1.at dawn/noon/dusk/night 

在黎明/在中午/在傍晚/在夜间

 

2.in the late afternoon 

在傍晚

 

3.three days later 

三天之后

 

4.shortly after 

不久以后

 

5.in the meantime 

与此同时

 

6.on that winter afternoon 

在那个冬天的下午

 

7.in my future life 

在我以后的生活中

 

8.at the end of the summer 

在夏末

 

9.in the following days 

在接下来的日子里

 

10.after ending a day’s work 

结束了一天的工作后

 

11.Days went by 

几天过去了

 

12.It was getting dark 

天黑下来了

 

13.They arrived soon after 

他们没多久就到了

 

14.I waited till they returned 

我一直等到他们回来

 

15.It was five o’clock in the morning 

那是在早上五点钟

 

16.It was daybreak when Jane woke up 

简醒来已是黎明

 

17.Years seemed to run more swiftly then 

那些年似乎过得更快

 

18.It occurred on the morning of the fifteenth 

事情发生在15号的上午

 

19.At early morning I went up through the hillside woods
清晨我穿越山坡的小树林

 

20.On entering the garden I noted that spring had come round 

一走进花园我就发现春天已经到了

 
二、表示地点与地理位置

 

1.in nature 

在大自然中

 

2.on the spot 

在现场

 

3.in the woods 

在小树林里

 

4.in the open wild 

在露天里

 

5.on the top of the hill 

在山顶上

 

6.in the gas station 

在加油站

 

7.along the stream 

沿着小溪

 

8.go a mile or so 

走了大约一英里

 

9.to the east of the village 

在村子的东面

 

10.on the other side of the forest 

在森林的另一边

 

11.The town is ten miles away 

镇子在十英里之外

 

12.At a distance, she spotted a misty figure

在远处,她发现了一个模糊的身影

 

13.Our hotel is within a stone’s throw of the beach

我们的酒店离海滨仅咫尺之遥

 

14.The ship struck a hidden rock beneath the surface of the water

船撞上了水下的礁石

 

15.We visited a small village off the map last summer

去年夏天我们去了一个偏僻的小村庄

 

16.He glanced at the map and told us that there would be a village less than twenty miles away

他瞥了一眼地图,然后告诉我们,前面再走不到20英里就是一个村庄

 

17.Arriving at the top of the hill,we were faced by a most impressive scene

到达山顶时,呈现在我们面前的是一片令人惊叹的景色

 

18.The small island is located somewhere on the Pacific coast.

那个小岛位于太平洋沿岸某处

 

使景物绘声绘色
 

 

三、表达天气变化

 

1.a stormy night 

暴风雨之夜

 

2.be buried in snow 

深埋在雪中

 

3.the wind-driven snow 

风雪交加

 

4.the bright blue sky 

明朗的天空

 

5.in the blinding rain 

在茫茫大雨中

 

6.cool and refreshing breeze 

凉爽清新的风

 

7.The fog is beginning to lift 

雾正在散去

 

8.The snow soon melted away 

雪不久就化了

 

9.The storm is at its height 

暴风雨下得正猛

 

10.The rain wetted his clothes 

雨水弄湿了他的衣服

 

11.The wind is whipping at my hair 

风吹打着我的头发

 

12.The needle-cold wind pierced his face 

寒风如针,刺着他的脸

 

13.It’s raining cats and dogs outside now

现在外面下着倾盆大雨

 

14.The scorching sun beat down on my head

火辣辣的太阳照在我的头顶

 

15.That night, the temperature dropped below zero

那天晚上,温度降到了零度以下

 

四、描绘自然景色

 

1.the beautiful scenery 

美景

 

2.the limitless green grass 

无边的草地

 

3.the beauty of the nature 

大自然的美

 

4.the great sights along the way 

沿途的美景

 

5.the countless stars in the curtain of nights 

夜幕下无数的星星

 

6.the night with fresh air and millions of stars

空气清新满天繁星的夜晚

 

7.The beautiful scenery is beyond description

这美丽的景色难以用语言形容

 

8.The night settled in 

夜幕降临

 

9.The sun sank behind the hills 

太阳落到山背后去了

 

10.The lotus flowers are now in full bloom 

荷花正在盛开

 

11.Moonbeams streamed in through a window

月光从一扇窗户倾泻而入

 

12.However, the lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and looked wonderful

然而,湖水在落日的余晖下闪亮如镜,景色迷人

 

13.There was almost no wind—only the flames of our fire for company

几乎没有风,只有篝火相伴

 

14.The rose gives out a sweet smell, which promises to be a perfect day

玫瑰花散发出香甜的味道,预示着美好的一天开始了

 

15.In the distance, we could see the misty cloud rising from the lake, which remains fresh in my memory

在远处,我们可以看到雾霭从湖的上方升起,那个情景我至今记忆犹新

 

把人物描写鲜活
 

 

五、描写人物的心理活动

 

1.be full of joy 

充满欢乐

 

2.with a light heart 

心情放松

 

3.a mixture of excitement and happiness 

既兴奋又开心

 

4.tremble with excitement 

激动地颤抖

 

5.be down in spirits 

情绪低落

 

6.feel hungry and exhausted 

感觉又饿又累

 

7.with tears in his eyes 

眼里含着泪水

 

8.be seized with sadness 

感觉很悲伤

 

9.fall into despair 

陷入绝望

 

10.with a heavy heart 

怀着沉重的心情

 

11.feel shocked and ashamed 

感觉震惊并羞愧

 

12.His heart leaped with joy 

他的心欢喜得怦怦直跳

 

13.Tears of happiness flowed down 

流下幸福的泪水

 

14.I saw her eyes well up with tears 

我看见她泪如泉涌

 

15.He stamped his feet in anger 

他气得跺脚

 

16.The crowd cheered and shouted happily

人们欢呼着,高兴地喊着

 
17.All of a sudden, the sadness on his face was wiped out
突然,他脸上的悲伤消失了

 

18.She felt within herself a sense of joy and happiness surging through her

她内心深处洋溢着喜悦和幸福

 

19.His dark eyes danced with pride, love and excitement

他黑色的眼睛闪动着骄傲、爱和兴奋的光芒

 

20.Hearing this, I felt very shocked and puzzled

听到这话,我感到非常震惊和迷惑

 

21.Although I was tired and in bad mood, I also felt warm and happy

尽管我疲惫且心情不好,但是我依然感受到了温暖和幸福

 

22.All the frustration and stress that had been building up inside of me came to a complete stop

所有在我体内堆积起来的沮丧和压力都烟消云散了

 

六、描写人物的个性品质以及外表外貌

 

1.be optimistic and ambitious 

乐观并且有抱负

 

2.a strong minded person 

一个意志坚定的人

 

3.lovely and good-natured personality 

温和可爱的个性

 

4.a well-built man 

一个身材魁梧的人

 

5.have a good figure 

体型好

 

6.a dark figure in the moonlight 

月光下有个模糊的人影

 

7.wear shoulder-length hair 

留着齐肩发

 

8.a girl in her early twenties 

一个20岁出头的姑娘

 

9.tie in a pony tail 

扎了个马尾辫

 

10.a weather-worn face 

一张饱经风霜的脸

 

11.a quiet gracious lady 

一位娴静有礼的淑女

 

12.an accomplished young lady 

一位年轻的才女

 

13.be equipped with a keen insight 

具有敏锐的洞察力

 

14.But he was kind and considerate 

但是他善良体贴

 

15.Her lovely face looked pale 

她可爱的面庞看上去苍白

 

16.He is with high cheek-bones and a sunken nose

他颧骨高耸, 鼻梁塌陷

 

17.Once I set a goal, I will make great efforts to realize it

一旦设定了目标,我就会竭尽全力去实现它

 

18.He sat in front of them, his dusty face masking his age
他坐在他们前面,满面尘埃掩盖了他的年龄

 

19.He is a man with great determination, of whom the perseverance is occasionally unimaginable

他是一个意志坚强的人,有些时候他的毅力是你没法想象的

 

20.Her husband was such a kind-hearted and considerate man that he hid the truth for his whole life

她丈夫是一个这么善良且体贴的人,以至于把真相隐瞒了一生

 

让叙事情节生动
 

 

1.race home 

快跑回家

 

2.take a stroll 

闲逛

 

3.pick up the phone 

拿起电话

 

4.set off for school 

启程去学校

 

5.tidy the room 

整理房间

 

6.head for the station 

朝车站走去

 

7.run after a rabbit 

追赶一只兔子

 

8.run away from the spot 

从现场逃跑

 

9.wander into the woods 

漫步向山里走去

 

10.carry water and plant trees 

提水种树

 

11.walk along the path 

沿着小道散步

 

12.wander over the countryside 

在乡间漫步

 

13.catch up with the class 

赶上同学们

 

14.go straight to the garden 

径直朝花园走去

 

15.He gazes up at the sky silently 

他静静地凝视着天空

 

16.She soon spotted me in the crowd

她很快在人群中发现了我

 

17.She kept drifting away in class today

今天课上她一直走神

 

18.A good idea suddenly flashed across his mind

一个好主意突然闪过他的脑海

 

19.I would catch up with them if I hurried

如果我加快速度,我就能赶上他们

 

20.He leaned in and whispered into my ears

他侧过身来,悄悄在我耳边说

 

八、描写人物动作

 

1.jump to one’s feet 

一跃而起

 

2.walk gracefully 

步态优美

 

3.pace back and forth 

来回踱步

 

4.read one’s mind 

看出某人的心思

 

5.look at me with a smile 

微笑看着我

 

6.look me up and down 

上下打量我

 

7.scream in anger 

恼怒地大叫起来

 

8.hug her son tightly 

紧紧地抱着她儿子

 

9.pat Tom on the shoulder 

拍了拍汤姆的肩膀

 

10.lean against sb’s shoulder 

靠着某人的肩膀

 

11.Everyone had a good laugh 

大家都大笑了

 

12.give Dad a kiss on the cheek 

吻了爸爸的脸

 

13.stroll aimlessly through the street 

毫无目的地在街上游荡

 

14.get along well with others 

与别人相处融洽

 

15.He stopped,taking a breath 

他停下来,喘着粗气

 

16.I struggled out of the bed 

我挣扎着从床上爬起来

 

17.I shook my head and said nothing 

我摇了摇头,什么也没说

 

18.He plucked up courage and knocked at the door

他鼓起勇气,敲了敲门

 

19.She grinned at me,her eyes sparkling

她对我露齿一笑,眼里闪烁着光芒

 

20.She asked over her shoulder,“Do you remember me?”

她扭过头问道,“你还记得我吗?”

 

让故事的意义得到升华
 

 

九、阐述故事的结局

 

1.feel a sense of warmth 

感觉到了温暖

 

2.remain fresh in one’s memory 

让人记忆犹新

 

3.a truly memorable experience 

值得珍藏的经历

 

4.treasure up this happy time 

铭记这幸福的时刻

 

5.lead to a brand-new future 

通往一个崭新的未来

 

6.live in my heart forever 

永远活在我的心中

 

7.be received with much appreciation 

深受赞扬

 

8.an enchanting mental and physical business 

一件身心有益的事情

 

9.recall the sweet moment of one’s high school life

回忆高中生活的美好时刻

 

10.as if a great weight had been lifted from me

好像卸掉了一个重包袱

 

11.have no choice but to tell him the truth

别无选择,只有告诉他真相

 

12.be bathed in the atmosphere of confidence

沉浸在自信的气氛中

 

13.a trip that we’d remember forever

我们终生难忘的旅行

 

14.achieve the dream of living in the countryside 

实现了居住在乡村的梦想

 

15.brighten our lives and keep our dreams colorful

点亮我们的生活,让我们的梦想丰富多彩

 

16.I would always love her till the end of my life

我将爱她一生

 

17.The two brothers waved grateful goodbye to him

兄弟俩感激地向他挥手告别。

 

18.He realized what his grandfather said proved to be right

他意识到他爷爷说的被证明是正确的

 

19.It is an unforgettable moment to me,which I will treasure forever.

这对我来说是一个难忘的时刻,我将永远铭记

 

20.My patience and love let him believe that the world was full of kindness

我的耐心和爱让他相信这个世界充满了善良

 

十、感悟与启示

 

1.understand what’s the meaning of life 

理解生命的意义

 

2.the most valuable thing in the world 

世界上最有价值的东西

 

3.the thing I valued most in my life 

我一生中最珍视的东西

 

4.gain a better understanding of life 

对生活有了更好的理解

 

5.enable us to understand each other better 

使我们能更好地相互理解

 

6.find the significance of the race 

发现比赛的真正意义

 

7.treasure the memory of this happy time 

珍惜这段幸福时光的回忆

 

8.realize the real meaning of success 

认识到了成功的真正含义

 

9.Helping others is a pleasure 

帮助别人是一种快乐

 

10.Helping others is helping ourselves 

帮助别人就是帮助我们自己

 

11.I will do well what I should do in my future life

在未来的生活中我会做好自己该做的事情

 

12.Absolute determination leads to eventual fulfillment of dreams

坚定的决心促使梦想的实现

 

13.I realized that a sincere heart was more significant than money

我意识到一颗真诚的心比钱更有意义

 

14.The happiest people are not those who own all the best things,but the ones who can really appreciate the beauty of life

最幸福的人并非是拥有最好的东西的人,而是那些懂得真正欣赏生活之美的人

 

15.Happiness lies for those who have cried,those who have been hurt,those who have searched,and those who have tried,for only they can appreciate the importance of people who have touched their lives.

幸福属于那些曾经哭过、受过伤害、努力尝试过的人,因为只有他们懂得那些走进他们生命中的人的重要性。

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